My summer vaction

We have started 2018 sharing some information about ourselves with the world.

I wrote to share about my summer with you.

I have worked on editing it to check that my capital letters and fullstops are correct.  

I have used feedback from my learning buddy and my teacher to make it the more interesting and
effective.

My summer vacation.

In the holidays, I went to Splash Planet for my last reunion in
Hastings. We were there for 4 hours. In Hastings, I felt happy
at Splash Planet.

The people that come to Hastings are my Tongan family in
Auckland and my family In Wellington. The Hastings people
stayed In Hastings to wait for us to come. We came before
Auckland because we had 4 hours to drive.

Then we came back. My family went to the beach to go fishing
for our lunch. Also, we went to go swimming because It was a
sunny day.

Then me, Luchiano, Lincoln, Paie, my sister and my baby
cousin went to the movies. We watched Jumanji.