Wednesday 26 July 2017

writting learning story

Writing a Narrative Learning Story


Success Criteria
We are learning to entertain an audience with a captivating narrative.  
I have the key parts of a narrative.
*Beginning
-hook
-setting
-character introduction
*Middle
-problem arising
-character development
*Ending
-resolution

I have included
-Interesting descriptive words
-A variety of sentence types
-Paragraphs that show how I’m organizing the narrative.
Planning
Hook-
Where it is space
When 17/6/17
What time 6.am

One day there were identical twins. They were thieves destroying the world together but there was three people who survived and their names were Tracey, Rina & Aano. They were trying their hardest to kill the twins but they just couldn’t. The twins created a new creature called The Creeper, it helped fight with the twins that destroyed my planet. Meanwhile Zeus & Kupe yelled out to the creeper and the twins to come and have a meeting about how to fight so they can beat us and make the planet their’s to live in because they wanted to try and find the hidden gold and diamond.
That's the end of the story
1  how hard did they try to kill them
2 how did the creeper and zeus come
3 where did they talk
4 why did they kill the city
5
Finished the Questions…………………………  
My next steps:
Next time I’m writing a narrative, I will be thinking about putting capital letters and checking for spelling and reading to see if it makes sense.









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